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Return of Lost Love
Contributed by
sride686
on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 03:47:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Look in my eyes girl and see my pain
These eyes once loved you girl
These eyes must have been insane
Hear my voice girl as I speak your name
It trembles with weakness and it trembles with pain
For it speaks of a love that went away
Now read my words as I write them true
Of a love I had that I lost to you
A love that would have lived on if only you were strong
And now you walk back in my life
You tell me you want me back by your side
But you walked back like you never left
Now tell me girl does my pain make you cry
For my eyes are wet and will never dry
And youll never feel what I feel inside
But I can no longer speak and no longer write
For I need sometime alone in my life
So now you can wait like I waited for you
And you can hope and pray that its my love that stays true
Copyright ©
sride686
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2005-04-25 03:47:38]
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Re: Return of Lost Love
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 03:16:03 PM AEST
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awww beautiful and so very sad.
Hope things work out for you.
good write. |
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Re: Return of Lost Love
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 08:51:39 PM AEST
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Aww Steve you absolutely break my heart when I read this. The pain and hurt you're going through, I can so much relate to this my dear friend. Hang tuff and may ur beautiful heart come to realise all the beauty and love that dwells within it. I'm always here for you.
My heart and prayers are with u dear Steve.
A hundred of heartfelt hugs for u,
~sue~ |
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Re: Return of Lost Love
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by GurlyTye on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:11:43 PM AEST
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| out of all of the wonderful things that you have written this one takes the cake.. i cried.. for a good 10 minutes... you are soo good at letting you feelings flow through your words... i can feel your pain when i read your writing.. i do hope that all wroks out for you... outstanding write steve....-Tye |
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