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Running Mate
Contributed by
Willofree
on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:57:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I caught a glimpse of a potential partner of mine
Seems to be an attraction of a kind
Keep running into each other
Power of coincidence
Well perhaps somewhat planned
Actually deliberate and carefully orchestrated
Fleeting, but repeated eye contact
Both of us seem interested, but too shy to react
We seem to be in a competition of some kind
Who will make the first move
So far both are a holdout, with no vote
Less risk of loosing the election
There is a joint overall campaign
Each to woe the other into the romantic domain
Fantacise even, about a relationship together
Been alone long enough
Hoepfully we both have all the right stuff
Gee, I hope someone takes a risk soon
Well it's almost time for a nomination
A vote is cast for someone to take some action
Hopefull we will win the election
Yea, she said yes to our going out on a date
Gosh, where do I take her where we could have some fun
The business of dating is a complicated one
Well it's time for an election
I cast my vote for a selection
Hope our campaign is successful
Yes the election is over, the choices made
a loving bond we did create
Oh, I only hope our relationship will last
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2005-04-25 10:57:39]
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Re: Running Mate
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 07:29:04 AM AEST
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| very interesting, so very engaging and clever. keep up the good work. |
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Re: Running Mate
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:15:57 PM AEST
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| i loved the metephor also. the creativity and the originality, which i think is very important in any work of art, was exceptionally used here. there was not a dull moment reading this. quite unusual these days on this site. never stop writing. |
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Re: Running Mate
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 03:09:58 PM AEST
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A complicated game, and one that makes me wish for older, simpler times. But you've made good progress. Here's to hoping you find fulfillment.
A very well-written and illustrative piece.
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Re: Running Mate
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 01:05:22 PM AEST
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creative, clever, great style and all around very sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Running Mate
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 06:26:28 PM AEST
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I agree! a very clever and well thought out write with an excellent use of vocabulary.
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Re: Running Mate
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 11:01:57 AM AEST
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| Very nice with a clever metaphor. I like this. Hope it works out. J. |
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