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Cry Me A Teardrop... (At Least)
Contributed by
ronald
on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Cry me a teardrop,
Cry me a river,
Cry me a vast sea,
Cry me an ocean,
Just do it somebody...
Oh, please,
Take part of my heartaches,
Nail them to your soul,
For a while,
Just for a moment!
And feel them,
Taste them,
Breathe them,
Let me see them in your eyes.
You see,
My soul is dying,
Drowning in the pool of sorrows,
Suffocating,
Trying to breathe,
Hyperventilating,
Feeling out of breath,
Like my life, stolen...
And someone!
Please!
Share this pain with me,
I am hurting all alone,
I'm just all alone,
Out in a streets,
Where wind blows the chill,
Oppressed by tyranny,
Of inflictions,
Afflictions,
The burning chill,
That I can't withstand,
No...
No more...
No more!
So, won't you care a little!
Won't you bring back the light!
For at least one more day,
For me?
Oh, somebody!
Come on!
Give me room to breathe!
Again!
Pull me thorugh from this!
Just pull me through!
Out of the wreckage!
So, won't you...
Cry me...
A teardrop...
At least...
Somebody...
Inspired by:
Cry by Faith Hill
Cry Me A River by Justin Timberlake
Copyright ©
ronald
... [
2002-12-25 20:00:00]
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Re: Cry Me A Teardrop... (At Least)
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by Suzy on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 01:15:25 AM AEST
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As you said yourself this is a sad poem...what it would feel like to feel this way...it would be horrible....I'm sure you wouldn't be the only one tho and I would gladly cry you a teardrop or more.....thanks for sharing this....
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Re: Cry Me A Teardrop... (At Least)
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by Mystery_Girl on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 03:25:00 AM AEST
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| And that certainly is a nice song by Faith Hill..... a heartfelt write here..... I liked the bit....like my life, stolen......so was mine .....take care...Tanya....:-) |
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Re: Cry Me A Teardrop... (At Least)
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by venkat on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 05:08:59 AM AEST
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| swoon with pain..since it is spine chilling...no tear drop I was almost stunned..Venkat |
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