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Diverted
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:06:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Everytime every time now
I give myself to the thought
When I drift on by the places
Where hope and love was lost
Etched in stone the names and
Dates, are given to the winds
Yet carved into my consciousness
Is a beginning not an end
Never had I imagined that there
Inside a moments hush
Would I hear a birds gentle song
And feel excitement rush
Everyday every day now
Unresisting, I open my arms wide
To the whispers that fall among
The stones, beneath a growing sky
For there as time disappeared
I watched the shadows bend
And the air felt wonderfully heavy
As I swallowed some of it in
Never had I dared to imagine
That this dream might be mine
But this, now, one too many thing
That begs me cross the line
Everyone every one now
Was transformed to something less
When time and place fell away
There where past and present met
For I knew before confirmation
That the perspective was the same
And I felt so very not alone
Standing amid forgotten names
Never again shall I forget
That it has been so all along
A soul will find its way home
When forever has come and gone
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Silent-No-More
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Re: Diverted
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:36:49 PM AEST
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u wont understand this comment but trust
me this is fascinating, like a lazy boy recliner,
it was deep, and comfortable to read, took
me away and made me feel safe, nice
writting nice feel to it excellant poem . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Diverted
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by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:46:09 PM AEST
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i loved it, it was just utterly facinateing to read, undoubtedly one of the better poems i have read way to go.
SM |
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Re: Diverted
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by GurlyTye on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:58:49 PM AEST
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| you have such a uniqe style... good write |
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Re: Diverted
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:06:42 PM AEST
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all i can say is amazing poetry! astounding really
loved it, very thought provoking and original |
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Re: Diverted
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by purecitrus on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:32:58 PM AEST
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this was an incredible poem - i especially loved the last two lines...keep up the amazing work.
Kate |
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Re: Diverted
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:29:05 AM AEST
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A soul will find its way home
When forever has come and gone
Well written and thoughtful work,
Snemmy.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Diverted
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 07:48:15 AM AEST
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Snemmita, this was so well writen.
It's rather thought provoking the way the poem goes.
I liked it, thanks for sharing.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: Diverted
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 11:32:26 AM AEST
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Your talent leaves me feeling in awe and overwhelmed....it's very humbling to experience your gift....
Superb
Will |
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Re: Diverted
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 08:23:39 AM AEST
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Wow! so much here.
This write eminates a "peacefulness" and contentment with the course that life is taking. A trust in fate, and yet it has an excitement to it as well, a coming into awarenss that feels refreshing and new.
Inspiring and reassuring at the same time.
What a wonderful creation!
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Re: Diverted
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by Steel on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:27:40 AM AEST
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Great read. I read a number of your poems. They were all appealing.
BTW, thanks for your welcome and your comments. |
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Re: Diverted
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:44:41 PM AEST
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| Sounds like a fresh start. How your stuff can be so lyrical without rhyming is beyond me, but what you do - you do well. Nice stuff, Snem. J. |
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Re: Diverted
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 04:34:01 AM AEST
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I stand in awe at your creativity and wonderful thoughts!
Even your comment before the poem induces a smile. :-)
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