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Alone in the desert
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:49:30 PM in AEST
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Alone in the desert
No words can express how completely alone I feel right now
There are people around me but Im all by myself somehow
Its like being in a desert with nothing surrounding me but sand
All I want is for someone to hold me and take my tiresome hand
I see a faint shadow so I look around and loudly scream
Not one single soul hears its like one big bad dream
Nobody comes to help me seems I am living in isolation
Dying in the desert alone is my final destination
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Re: Alone in the desert
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:56:58 PM AEST
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Sad and very heartfelth your vibes r
tearstained with longin and pain,
an effective peice poetry . . .
Dorain Chambers |
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Re: Alone in the desert
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:16:32 PM AEST
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I like the desert. I like being alone in the desert for that matter. I walked 22 miles in the desert once...that sucked...i had a nice long talk with god....or maybe i was just babbling to myself...hell, maybe it's the same thing ^_^
i like, by the way...i can relate...to lonliness anyway...or at least i used to be able too....i've been alone for so long now that i've found comfort in it....
the real world scares me...
always, abraham |
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Re: Alone in the desert
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:07:06 AM AEST
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Aww I can feel ur lonliness through every verse. This I can so much relate to. A very well written and expressed piece of poetry.
Well done.
Hugs,
~sue~
PS Thanks so much for ur kind comments on my poems. They are deeply appreciated. Thanks again. |
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Re: Alone in the desert
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 07:04:05 AM AEST
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| how very sad, and full of desolate imagery. I liked it very much. thanks fer sharing. |
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Re: Alone in the desert
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by Kazzy1231 on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 07:24:56 AM AEST
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| Nice write,youe wrote how I feel. |
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