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The moment you left
Contributed by
kitty_express2001
on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:51:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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The moment you left you broke my heart.
Then you broke my bart.
Then I cried.
Then I died.
My eyes was wide.
As I layed by your side.
I was your fool.
for playing your old school.
Soon I was playing with a tool because I was
your fool.
I thought when I cried you would accept me
as your bride.
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Re: The moment you left
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by kitty_express2001 on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:54:19 PM AEST
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| THIS WAS A VERY GOOD POEM IN DEED GREAT WRITE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK I REALLY LOVE READING ALL OF YOUR POEMS....... ONE DAY YOU WILL BE A GREAT WRITER GETING A BOOK PUBLISHED... THEN I WOULD HAVE TO GO BUY YOUR PUBLISHED BOOK:) ... KEEP ON WRITING:) |
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