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Today
Contributed by
GurlyTye
on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:38:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Today,
a small peice of me
floated away
i heard my heart break
As my soul began to scream
I LOVE YOU!!!
WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?
Today,
I sank into sadness
everything got dark
and i just couldn't move
when the tears began to fall
WHY DO YOU HATE ME?
LOOK AT ME CRY FOR YOU
Today,
I decided I wanted to die
nothing is good
I have lost everything.
what reason do I have to live?
LOOK WHAT YOU DID!
THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!!!!
Today,
I took my own life
I sank into the bliss of nothingness
Copyright ©
GurlyTye
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2005-04-25 23:38:59]
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Re: Today
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:23:20 AM AEST
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Love is a strong emotion
that should not be wasted
on those who hurt you.
Know you deserve better.
Maybe you need to love yourself right now,
find your will to live and love
tomorrow.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Today
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 01:38:09 AM AEST
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Errie write that. I can only assume the Two line stanzas are the ever Calling Sub -conscious .
Its a good write . It left the reader with feeling of a heavy heart.
Whisper |
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Re: Today
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by sride686 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:35:09 AM AEST
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| Wow Tye this is a good write I can really feel the pain and as you know this has also been the pain I’ve been feeling. My thoughts go out to you and hopes you will find your love. Your writing to dark girl you’ve been reading to much of my work.…LOL….take care always and I hope to read more of your pieces….Steve |
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Re: Today
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 11:38:35 AM AEST
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My friend... however tempting Suicide may be... please, do not turn to it for release... We all feel this way one time or another, and hopefully, it will soon vanish... For, a friend does not deserve such pain and sorrow... I send all my comfort, hope, and love to you, cheri... In hopes that your day might grow brighter... and maybe... tomorrow will be better. This was an incredibly emotional write, I know how you feel, cheri Tye... I believe many can relate to this. Thank you so much for sharing. *Hugs for a hurting friend.* All my love. Hope you feel better soon. If you need to talk, I'm only a PM away. =) Forever,
Your concerned friend and fan,
Stephy! |
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Re: Today
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:35:35 AM AEST
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| amazing |
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Re: Today
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by Channing on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:23:21 PM AEST
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| Love can really tear someone down, very good poem. |
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