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Suicidal Note
Contributed by
Cici
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Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I am a nervous wreck
I deserve respect
when I am crying
when I think of dying
I've got problems too
Some which include you
Feel i'm walking a tightrope
Not knowing how to cope
I feel i've had it up to here
for I know, as I still tear
I am suicidal still
I deserve this pain called kill
I can't go on no more
Your find me dead on my floor
Copyright ©
Cici
... [
2002-12-25 22:20:00]
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Re: Suicidal Note
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by abrahamt on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 11:13:00 PM AEST
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| I do hope you are not at depressed as your poem seems to indicate....its Christmas, and my best wishes go out to you! |
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Re: Suicidal Note
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 11:55:16 PM AEST
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I would like to echo what abraham said and would like to say that just because its Christmas doesnt mean ppl are happier. Sometimes they are sad if not sadder.
Although I wish I couldn't say this I've felt like u at times and I know how hard it is. Especially the 'tightrope' 'cope' parts. This was a well written poem although some of the rhymes seemed forced. Anyway keep yer chin up and although I don't know you and I can't see you I would still like to give u a hug *hugz*. Hang in there.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Suicidal Note
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 12:24:19 AM AEST
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Wow Cici i hope your not feeling like this for real....my heart is right there with you as i have felt this way many times in my life....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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