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Why I am who I am
Contributed by
Jaycee
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 07:01:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You always ask
why I am who I am
but your lifeless lipservice
is all but a sham
Why can't you see
that my life is my own
so stop intefering
And leave me alone,
You pretend that you care
your concern is so cheap
Rivers of blood flow
the cuts are so deep
It's time to prove it
Show me some care
You know you can't do it
You'll fail this dare
Behind close doors
grind me into the ground
then slither away
not making a sound
You deny its existence
that suffer I do
life is just fine
because its fine for just you
Like a flower I spring
through a crack in cement
then you snuff out that life
with much anger you vent
My visions so colorful
in a world filled with flak
you smother me down
and paint my soul black
You've ruined my life
my body you tear
now you claim to help
and offer repair
A volume of lies
what you offer to me
and eternal suffering
coupled with dishonesty
Copyright ©
Jaycee
... [
2005-04-26 07:01:46]
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Re: Why I am who I am
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by sandysandysandy on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 07:07:06 AM AEST
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| wow.. great write. You learned from this one. move on and trust again. The fruit from a tree should be the fruit that it bares. good fruit. watch for good fruit. |
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Re: Why I am who I am
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by PainfulSpirit06 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 07:40:20 AM AEST
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| That is such a beautiful poem. I encourage you to keep writing. You can honestly go places. |
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Re: Why I am who I am
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by spazz911 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:35:22 AM AEST
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this is an awsome poem, so true about the harshness in life so to speak....well great job
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Re: Why I am who I am
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by blue_angel on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:48:21 PM AEST
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wow... gosh i can totally take this poem and shove it in my parents face. theyd never see it coming...
brilliance at its best. awesome write. ill read it again...
jennie* |
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