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Love Walked Away
Contributed by
sride686
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:01:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My thoughts run deep and torture my soul
Like a sleepless night Im left out of control
These thoughts run deep and grip my heart
Then the proceed to tare it apart
Im left alone to cry and grieve
Over a life Ive lost that I still need
I let love go and it walked away
Walked out of my life forever that day
Now Im left to bleed tell death
Tell I lay my head down to rest
My life is a skeleton in a open grave
But yet my body still feels the pain
So I close my eyes to forever sleep
But before I do I start to weep
As the rain of tears roll down my cheeks
I take my life and take my grief
With a lace of ribbon that runs down to my feet
Copyright ©
sride686
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2005-04-26 10:01:39]
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Re: Love Walked Away
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 11:05:56 AM AEST
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i can feel the heart ache inside the words
its a beautiful tragic poem
great write
i love this line
' as the rain of tears roll down my cheeks '
love han xxx |
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Re: Love Walked Away
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:25:29 PM AEST
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| That's a sad poem. I can feel the heartache with every word, and I can think of my ex. Now I can feel the rain of tears rolling down my cheeks too! What an emotional poem! Great work. Jenny |
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Re: Love Walked Away
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:24:49 AM AEST
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Steve once again u never cease to amaze me. You write with so much emotion and ur style in writing so unique. I sense pain, anguish and so much heart break in ur poem. You elucidate what ure feeling in depth. Well done and so sorry ure in pain. hang tuff my friend.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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Re: Love Walked Away
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by GurlyTye on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 05:00:31 PM AEST
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| once again.. a wonderfull write.. you are so very talented... keep writing steve...... Tye |
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