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Thank You For Nothing
Contributed by
Cici
on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I went through pain
With nothing to gain
I told you all about it
If only they would admit it
I have been through hell
Im not mad, they should be in a cell
They have done it twice
Maybe look at them and think, not so nice
Can't you imagine its happened to me
Tears drip from my eyes when you say it's not true
I went to the police about it
Why would I do that if I was making it up
I already have an anxiety problem
All I need is more people saying im mad
Would you like it if someone said you were abnormal
I don't think you would
All I did was tell the truth and all I get is hassle
From people who say they are going to help me but no
They can't, for one they don't believe me
Why can't you see what they have done to me
What is wrong, why have doubts when you can just see
What they really have done to me
I will never be the same again, ever
Why should we be punished for what they did
Why won't they get any punishment
They committed a crime, can't you see that
Thank you for doing nothing
Thank you for not punishing them
All I feel like is dying and it will be blamed partly on you
Copyright ©
Cici
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2002-12-25 23:00:00]
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Re: Thank You For Nothing
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by venkat on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 05:42:08 AM AEST
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| They should be hanged for their wrongs But you should longlive ! Cici you have a special style of writing. is it not drametic dialogue1 |
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Re: Thank You For Nothing
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by Vampy on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 12:37:55 PM AEST
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| After reading a couple of your poems, I can see that you've been through a lot of pain. But keep living and keep writing... you can reach out to others in your situation by doing so... |
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Re: Thank You For Nothing
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 02:34:52 PM AEST
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I loved this a lot of previously unshed pain and tears was poured into this. You write beautifully thnx for posting and thnx for your mention on the forum. I'll be on the lookout for more of your stuff. It appears to me you have a great talent.
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