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The DeFeniTioN Of L.O.V.E.
Contributed by
concrete_rose
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 02:31:24 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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Lonley, is what I feel, when your LOVES' away from me
Only you can give me strength to fly, so openly and free
Vividly and constantly I think of you and me and
Everything we can become, I cherish what I see
And what I see is only you
My angel from above
So passionate I'm in need of you
In other words, I'm in LOVE
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concrete_rose
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2005-04-26 14:31:24]
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Re: The DeFeniTioN Of L.O.V.E.
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:09:13 PM AEST
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Short sweet and to the feeling you have, but in the first stanza you had a couple forced lines...Other then that I enjoyed the ending and the messege you portrayed...Great Job
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Re: The DeFeniTioN Of L.O.V.E.
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by Channing on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 10:10:13 PM AEST
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| Not to bad, it explains what your trying to get across, that you're in love. |
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