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The Difference Between Me And You
Contributed by
Cici
on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I made him happy, You made him sad I made him laugh, You made him cry I made him smile, You made him frown I dried his tears, You brought him fears I know when he is telling the truth, You just say he has got to have proof I made him cheerful, You tormented him I made him positive, You made him negative I made him in control, You controlled him I was kind, You were cruel I made him bright, You made him miserable I made him merry, You made him grumpy I made him thrilled, You pressurized him He chose to love me, You made him hate you I made him gleeful, You made him suicidal I made sure we had fun, You seem worse and he's your son Who seems the better one?
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Cici
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2002-12-25 23:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Difference Between Me And You
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 05:33:29 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful. A beautiful comparison.A superb challenge. Your poem is spicy, tasty beyond belief. |
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