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Contributed by
InexactExactness
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Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
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The ice forms in your heart again
Push me away
You want to leave and I know you will
So leave me again today
Shivers run up your spine again
But you don't complain
So empty, so cold, much dying inside
You emerging from your frame
The rhythm of what I used to know
Has simply died away
The person that I used to know
Has simply died away
But everything will be Okay
You're just in that phase again
And everything will come together somehow
When we all least expect it
Then it's back to you being you
It's back to being us
Then it's back to having it all
There's no sense in getting too much
Ice cold rain drops falling
Will warm your heart as always
Those same rain drops falling
Bring you laughter on these rainy days
I sense changes in you
Like that of the changing seasons
These things all seem so strange
They go against all of my reason
But everything will be fine
Everything will be alright
You are who you are and I love you for that
Even through all of our differences
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Re: Changes
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by Suzy on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 12:57:32 AM AEST
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awesome poem....it's nice when you can find someone to love even tho you share so many differences.....
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Re: Changes
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 03:31:15 AM AEST
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I like this. It's so obviously personal but yet easy to relate to. I love some of the lines. Deep stuff. lol. Awesome write.
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Re: Changes
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 12:35:27 AM AEST
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To know someone's soul in this manner is so beautiful...and to know what they will do and predict how their hearts are is absolutely beautiful...even through all the bad you are full of hope and content just knowing why that person is doing all of that to you....like that of the changing seasons and comparing it to that is beautiful.....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it so much and it helps me look at things in a different way....a simple much more beautiful way than i ever looked at things in the world....this has given me much to think about in life...
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