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Of Souls and Sirens
Contributed by
Soul_of_the_Siren
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 07:07:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In the dark,
My soul waits,
To be found.
While I wait
My soul hates
The siren's sound.
The sirens sing,
Their voice a spell,
That captures you.
I watch them drag,
You into hell,
I cry for you.
Now that you're gone,
Who will save me
From the rising tide?
My soul is lost,
And they can't see,
How I hurt inside.
So I just smile
And say 'I'm fine'
My wounds soon will heal.
When it's my time,
Then I shall shine,
And my smile will be real.
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2005-04-26 19:07:45]
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Re: Of Souls and Sirens
(User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 07:58:29 PM AEST
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eh...I will say that the format is only complex just because it is hard to use with rhythmn and rhyme...other then that it's pretty simple, tho I am NOT taking anything from you for that. Now to the poem itself...I like the darkness about it and how your words amplify the feeling behind them. So all around great job and I hope the best for you in the future...BTW I also like the ending alot too.
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