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the sun sets on my life
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:24:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sinking down slowly
Hearing the clock tick
As the sun sets on my life
A complexion of colors
Rip through the skies
My multicolored beauty
O why do I see now?
That the light was always there
That my sun could be so beautiful
As it sets upon my life
The golds and reds
The blackness so pale
How can that be?
It had consumed me for so long
Up until now
When my colors showed bronze
Dont let it be too late
Catch me before the time comes
Catch me before I fall
And the sun sets on my life
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spazz911
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2005-04-26 20:24:26]
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Re: the sun sets on my life
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by hrpuffnstuff on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:58:45 PM AEST
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| aw spazz thats so sad great write love hxxx |
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Re: the sun sets on my life
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by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 12:23:28 AM AEST
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| i love how you brought the colors into the poem, great write. |
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Re: the sun sets on my life
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:46:27 PM AEST
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this is wonderful, a pleasure to read:) hugs n' love nessa
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