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I Could Never Live Without You
Contributed by
forgottenone_iam
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 09:53:46 PM in AEST
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Saying good- bye to him was
one of the hardest things to do,
he was everything i dreamed of
in a guy, he was perfect.
The night i said good-bye
was so hard, i was waiting
for him to come around the
corner smiling like always.
I hadn't seen him in six months,
these past six months were so hard,
all the pain i was put through was
almost unbearable, i didnt know how
much longer i could handle this pain.
I was so scared to see him again,
i was wondering what my reaction
would be, would i be happy, sad or
even mad.
I was sitting facing the mountains,
when i saw a figure coming closer
and closer towards me, it was
him, i was so happy and
sun disapeared behind him, i saw
his face.
I jumped up and gave him the biggest
hug ever in the world, when i stepped
back, i noticed there was something
behind his back, he slowly pulled it
in front of him, it was a beautiful
boquet of my favorite flowers.
Tears started rolling down my eyes,
the past six months i felt so lonely,
and now i felt like i was so happy
and nothing could have gotten better
at that moment.
I looked down at my flowers,
so perfect and cute and looked back
in those crystal blue eyes i hadnt
seen in like forever, and he was
smiling, i didnt know what to think,
i was about to break my heart and
his.
We started talking like we never left
each other sides, it felt so good,
The night was ending i new i had
to say it soon, all though i didnt
want to, now he had to leave it
was now or never.
I was about to do it and then
he lind down ever so slowly
and kissed me, i started to cry
and told him i couldnt do this
anymore, he gave me a confused
look like what are you talking
about.
I finally told him the distance
was to much, my heart was
getting broken to many times,
i love him but i couldnt handle
it anymore.
And that is the night i said
Good bye to the one i trully
loved.
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Re: I Could Never Live Without You
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 09:57:44 PM AEST
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wow, sad write...i really hate goodbyes they break my heart
well done...sometimes we must let go |
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Re: I Could Never Live Without You
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 11:17:33 PM AEST
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oi vey, tough thing to read... hits too close to home! superb writing.
~Remy~ |
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Re: I Could Never Live Without You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 03:04:35 PM AEST
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goodbyes are hard sesecially to the one we love
wonderful right
great emotion |
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Re: I Could Never Live Without You
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 03:01:05 PM AEST
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| That's so sad :( I had to break up with the one I loved, I was confused about my own emotions, it's the biggest mistake I've ever done. I feel the same way you did when you couldn't see him... Jenny |
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