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The Orchard
Contributed by
Aureoverinicus
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:28:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Idly standing on the fields of our dawn
Awash in dew, and fed by the new sun
Is the orchard of fruit and natures awn
Illuminated by the springs spectrum
Where children play til the sweet smell of dusk.
A generations renewed sense of hope,
Yet time marches on and leaves turn to rusk.
Their youthful dreams fall to an older scope.
The calloused hand reaches a calloused age
Where the fruit was sewn and has become ripe,
Juxtaposed among the sweet smell of sage.
Such matured sweat defines the tines of life.
Here too, life moves inevitably
As eyes glaze over like the snowy hinterland
Expanse the orchard surely comes to be
It delights the contemplative mind and
Touches the hoary beard of earth and man.
The year was good, from toil came fruition
The planet revolved on united plan
And things carried on, past Gods perdition.
Together in motion; in harmony
Underneath the same silent sky of blue,
The birds sing the morn a sweet eulogy
As the winter dies and life springs anew.
Copyright ©
Aureoverinicus
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2005-04-26 22:28:40]
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Re: The Orchard
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:49:17 PM AEST
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very serene writing style, not to mention an advanced vocabulary... kudos! it's good.
~Remy~ |
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Re: The Orchard
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 11:02:42 PM AEST
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| i agree with remy on this. this was amazing, simply put. im glad i read this poem, because of its quality. never stop writing. |
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Re: The Orchard
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 01:36:35 AM AEST
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Beautifully written and your words well chosen.
Keep up your writing style, it shows! |
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Re: The Orchard
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by Bugoron on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:48:02 PM AEST
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| Not much I can say that the others haven't already covered. I enjoyed the elaborate use of vocabulary as well. I commend you :) |
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