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Guilty
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 06:47:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Our hearts seem to beat fast and slow at the same time And now that were here I cant figure out what was mine I stand next to you and wonder why did we think this could work? And now I see you without clouded vision I wonder where your lies really lurk
Standing here I wonder if you ever had a heart Or if you were just another demon in the dark I wish we could go back to when you were real I wish we could go back to when I could feel
Now you charmed everyone around you They dont know whats wrong and whats true I didnt think you could be this way But then again I didnt think I would live past this day
So all alone at the end with you When we were broken, I wish I knew what to do I wish I could go back to find the truth But you were so ruthless
Do you deserve to die without someone beside you? Did you turn to lies because you couldnt face the truth? Did you fight because you were afraid to lose? Did you take it all because you couldnt choose?
Now, now stop this show There isnt a thing we dont know Stop pointing fingers No question of your guilt lingers
Your life can be fixed Not mine, its too late Im sailing on the river Styx Who knows what trails await
You shall be judged in your mind You can lie and you can doubt You lie to yourself You will always be guilty
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blueeyedevil13
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2005-04-27 06:47:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Guilty
(User Rating: 1 ) by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:53:31 AM AEST (User
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actually i disagree, i like this kind of poetry. but of course, you are your toughest critic. i still loved it nonetheless.
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Re: Guilty
(User Rating: 1 ) by lizabeth283 on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 09:16:38 PM AEST (User
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this is a very interesting poem....i'm not quite sure what the meaning behind why you wrote it is....but i do think that you could probably find a million meanings behind it and i think that is why i like it so much. good piece!! |
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Re: Guilty
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kamal on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 11:44:52 AM AEST (User
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I understand where you coming from..
I almost feel guilty after reading though
Great write!.. |
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