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Blissful Ignorance
Contributed by
dark_descent
on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 07:13:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Early sun
Like a day dressed in gold
A cape over the clouds.
The time when
The dark of the world is covered
And everyone is
Born again
With innocent eyes
Hiding from reality
In the rays of
The morning sun
A gift for the world to share
A new start
A new sky
A glimpse of heaven,
Which most of us are
Too blind to see
Or too young to care
Dewdrops
Clinging to the petals,
To the leaves,
To the grass,
As if drinking their beauty.
Holding on,
Eventually tumbling,
Like tears,
Dissolving in soil
As if they never existed
At all.
Ignored.
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dark_descent
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2005-04-27 07:13:39]
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Re: Blissful Ignorance
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 06:38:10 PM AEST
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I really like how this was written even tho I am partial to rhyme... this is a beautiful piece and well written and structured..Great Job
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Re: Blissful Ignorance
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:19:34 PM AEST
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Another well written work. Keep writing always.
Take care.
David |
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