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The Five Fives
Contributed by
dkanis
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Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 08:03:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Five Fingers
Which Tonite
Count The Many
Numbers In And Of
My Life
I Have Five Thoughts
And Four Possiblities
But Only Three Chances
Two Already Know
And Theres One Failed Attempt
Five Fears
Four Tears
Three Lights
Two Fights
One Loss
Five Reasons To Live
Four That I Would Trade For The One
Three That Keep Me Going
Two Risks I Took
Resulted In One Failure
Five Screams
Four Dreams
Three
Two
One Motivation
Douglas K.
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dkanis
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2005-04-27 08:03:54]
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Re: The Five Fives
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by Dkanis on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:00:51 AM AEST
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opps, it should say
Five Screams
Four Dreams
Three Try's
Two Lie's
One Motivation |
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Re: The Five Fives
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by remote on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 04:01:56 PM AEST
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| This is a fantastic poem. |
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Re: The Five Fives
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by Channing on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 01:02:27 AM AEST
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| Interesting set up for the a poem, I like how each stanza it was like a countdown. Good job! |
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