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Thoughts of the Mind
Contributed by
PainfulSpirit06
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Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 08:36:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My mind is telling me to be strong
My soul is telling me to release and be free
But my heart is telling me to hold and don't let go
This is so frustrating, you loving two
I guess that's why we both don't know what to do
As much as I hurt, I fight even harder
Not ready to move on, but sometimes I wish I had the will
Not because I don't love you but
because how would you feel if my love for your was split
between two, you and......your brother?
But I couldn't be you either having to pick your mate or your mother
Though I know your love for me is eternal and infinite lasting
You feel the same for someone else, and your love sometimes feels
plastic, or fake
You say one thing to me, then you say the same to her
It makes me feel, well, not special or unique
It also makes my anger and depression peak
How could you say the same things?
We may be similar but **** we are still different
AAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! this is so confusing
Why are we going through this again?
Can you tell me how it could even begin
Sometimes I feel like it's the end
Sometimes I feel like giving up, and no longer giving a...........
Sometimes I feel like you only will go with me
to see how it would be, not in a good way by the way
The once you find out, leave me and go for her
If you did that, I'd be hurt beyond belief
But there's no point in stating that just yet
Are these lines just thoughts or what
Thoughts scrambled coming out here and there
But it's what my mind is telling me
So I guess I'll just be strong
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Re: Thoughts of the Mind
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by Kyarn on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:00:07 AM AEST
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That was good. Nice flow, nice word choice...well expressed emotion.
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