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Tears
Contributed by
Kiira
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Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 12:19:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Her soul is burning
She's completely overwhelmed
Her heart is yearning
She's completely lost
Her eyes have run out of tears
She's completely through
Her biggest fears
She's completely gone
Her hope is fading rapidly
She's completely in love
Her heart was stolen savagely
She's completely in love with you......
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Kiira
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2005-04-27 12:19:51]
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 )
by karmen on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 12:43:14 PM AEST
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i like this alot.. its good.. i've wrote a few poems kinda like this.. but anyways good write
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Re: Tears
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:18:32 AM AEST
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| I think you've a unique style for sure, it seems to fade in and out of rhyme. Strong emotions and open heart feelings make this a good one. keep it up. dw |
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