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Kiss me, Kill me...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 02:54:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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KISS ME
Sacrifice your lips to me,
Brush them gently against mine
Dont say a word,
Stifle your screams,
As I lovingly castrate you
Smile and endure,
This bittersweet torture I give you
Fulfill every crimson fantasy,
Bear the mark you wear with pride,
Let me love you,
The only way I know and can
Heaven eyes flooding with tears of agony,
Precious mouth screaming vulgarities,
Quivering hand attempting to cease the bleeding,
All in vain
Gaping wounds weep scarlet lamentations,
Your tattered body trembling under my touch
Such ecstasy, your anguish
Sing me your pain-filled melody,
A rising crescendo of cries,
Late into the night,
As I drag my claws down your face and back
How much can you take,
Darling?
KILL ME!
You scream
An end to this ruthless torment,
Death, your last resort
Chained to my bed of nails,
Dying ever so slowly,
Muttering worthless prayers to your god
He cant save you now
Caress me once more,
With your bloody fingertips
Kiss me,
One last time
Before I kill you
I loved you to pieces...
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FleurdeSang
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Re: Kiss me, Kill me...
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by GurlyTye on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 03:12:10 PM AEST
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| i am not so sure that phycotic it the right choice of words.. It's amazing how you can take somthing soo sick and crule and turn it into such a good write.. |
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Re: Kiss me, Kill me...
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 04:05:03 PM AEST
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Stephy ... Oh, Stephy ... I must reread the directors ( UNCUT ) version of Blood Flower 8, now. Not the revised edited fluffy post that they allowed. This is Ivy's scene to pefection. "I loved you to pieces" ... fabulous... the only thing missing here for it to fit completely .... one word ... a name really ... or title if you will ... Ivy would have said .... Father !!
In awe ...
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Kiss me, Kill me...
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 04:22:07 PM AEST
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Beautifuly written deeply sensitive and very
emotional . . . Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Kiss me, Kill me...
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 05:01:00 PM AEST
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| my kinda gal .... |
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Re: Kiss me, Kill me...
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 06:49:01 PM AEST
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| this is so amazing..i love it so much it hurts..this was one of the greatest writes i've read so far....thank you so much for posting this... |
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Re: Kiss me, Kill me...
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 12:38:29 AM AEST
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ooh very nice I hadn't read any psychotic
poems in a while but this sure sated any
desire to read another one for awhile. I loved
all of this very dark and hopeless. My favourite
stanza was the one that started with this line.
"Heaven eyes flooding with tears of agony,"
Bloody great if I may say so.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Kiss me, Kill me...
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:47:02 AM AEST
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Ohh now that was just perfectly gory. My cupa of tea.
I loved this Stephy i can't think of anything else to say at the moment, but i did love this.
Jane |
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