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perfect
Contributed by
xAegisx
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Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 06:46:51 PM in AEST
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if this world was perfect then i'd have you if this world was perfect then no one would care if this world was perfect then i could love you and be loved if this world was perfect it wouldn't seem like u only used me if this world was perfect you would get rid of her if this world was perfect then you would come back to me if this world was perfect then you'd know how i really feel if this world was perfect then you'd know that i love you if this world was perfect then you could know that i did what i did so you would love me too... but you never loved me and i doubt you ever will you say you don't like her and that you like me more but yet when i see you and her together when i hear her say i love you to you i know the truth i know that i will never have you the way i want you
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Re: perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:43:11 PM AEST (User
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This is sad, well written, but sad. "if this world was perfect" wouldn't that be wonderful...but since it's not, we gotta take everything in stride. nice job, though the rhythem was lost here and there. |
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Re: perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by crazygirl on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 02:17:08 PM AEST (User
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im not gonna lie im crying now.I've had the exact same emotions, and to be honest i still do. This was thee best poem, i've ever read honestly. I really love the way you put your words; in all of your poems. Truly wonderfull |
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