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Never Falling from Grace
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 07:23:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Peeling skin seals my fate
Spilling blood, quenches thy hate
Of never falling from grace
A predetermined disapointment
Of my life deemed pointless
My presence ignored
Ever since being born
So now rolls the thunder of the storm
. . .
The bullet left
No remorse
Just a blood mess
My lifeless corpes
. . .
Of no regret
For I know the memory of me
Will never be kept
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-04-27 19:23:27]
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Re: Never Falling from Grace
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:24:44 PM AEST
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| clark, this is far from ****. i loved it. you only had one problem, its corpse. =] i loved in the beginning how you used thy. you ending is good as it always is, that is no surprise. never fallen from grace....such a line...such a great title. and by the way clark, you need to stop thinking that i get mad at you when i have long periods of silence, lol. keep writing the masterpieces. |
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Re: Never Falling from Grace
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:31:16 AM AEST
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| AWESOME |
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