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Every Moment In Life
Contributed by
tollo
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Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I watch on t.v.
the torture of Palestine,
how they have so little to protect themselves,
how their souls are as brave
as a fearless tiger,
how they never give up,
how they fight to keep whats theirs,
how they can feel Gods with them,
how they cry tears for help,
how they had to watch all their family and friends disapear one by one,
how they had watch what was once
bright-green turn to whats now blood red,
it makes me feel like a spoiled brat,
it makes me cry endless tears,
because not once did I recongnis my life wasn't as bad as I thought,
all this time I kept on asking for things
then giving,
all this time I thought
my family would always be there,
but I can wake up tomorrow morning
without them,
then I'd have nothing,
It makes me feel like every moment in life
is worth something,
Copyright ©
tollo
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2002-12-26 18:20:00]
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Re: Every Moment In Life
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 12:32:52 AM AEST
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good poem. good message. bring it on.
peace out |
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Re: Every Moment In Life
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 03:55:10 AM AEST
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Very good. I love how you express your opinion without sounding..opinionated. yuou seem very open-minded, yet hurt about the subject. well thanx for sharing
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Re: Every Moment In Life
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by tollo on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 09:20:17 PM AEST
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| thanx alot |
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Re: Every Moment In Life
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by tollo on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 09:21:40 PM AEST
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| thanxs a bunch |
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Re: Every Moment In Life
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 08:39:02 PM AEST
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| yeah, xlent poem |
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Re: Every Moment In Life
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by zeppchic420 on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 05:44:39 AM AEST
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| this is good, it really expresses your emotions, and thank you so much for your comment on my poem allbecause of you-ive never read that until tonight-thankyou for thinking so highly of my writing, but don't understimate your own skills |
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Re: Every Moment In Life
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 03:43:03 AM AEST
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I feel the same about this. Excellent poem. Great job.
Andrew |
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