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Rantings of a Depressed Girl
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
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Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:03:24 AM in AEST
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I walk through the school halls in a daze
Thinking about the blades in my pocket.
The doctors say its only a faze.
They say take your pills, youll get better
I say ***** life, ***** the civic center,
I wish I were one of those people who died that day.
Howd they get so lucky? What else can I say?
I can barely make out a smile a day.
How will I ever be normal again?
Im sorry Dad not everythings ok.
I cant be your perfect little girl
Things changed my lives in a whirl.
Im sorry I pushed everyone away.
These days it just seems no one wants to stay.
Im alone in the world no one cares,
I hate this world, lifes unfair.
I shy away from love, I shy away from you.
I shy away from everything I ever thought was true.
You were my best friend; I thought it would never end.
But here I am pushing you away.
Whats gotten into me?
Why am I acting this way?
-Kate Ecklund-
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Re: Rantings of a Depressed Girl
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 03:26:57 AM AEST
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This was a very sad write .. but it was a very
good write.. Great job!! |
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Re: Rantings of a Depressed Girl
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:15:54 AM AEST
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| Wow what a powerful write this was. It was sad but it was very powerful. You could really feel the pain and the questions in this write, lost not knowing were to turn or were to run to. Just run away from everything is sometimes the only answer one can find. I wish the best to you and hope that you can work through this pain in your life. You have knew friends here that you can always talk to if you need to. Take care and keep writing these outstanding pieces of work…..Steve |
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Re: Rantings of a Depressed Girl
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:33:51 AM AEST
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oh so sad and i am so sorry. but i can honestly relate so much i really can
amazing and i also feel the dead ones are lucky
this poem breaks my heart
i wish u all the hope in the world |
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Re: Rantings of a Depressed Girl
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:37:46 PM AEST
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Its just a suggestion . However it sounds like Volunteering may be an answer . Perhaps a Hospital in a childrens ward. Then you can a appreaciate what you already have and feel that you are making a difference to someone. I can relate to what you wrote but ggee try it and see. Wishing ya well Peace
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Re: Rantings of a Depressed Girl
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 06:43:18 AM AEST
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Geez, Kate, this hurt to read - and I'm not referring to your abilty as a poet, just your raw pain and confusion about why you feel this way. I won't counsel you that this is a phase, or that you should find other diversions or committments- this is your life and where you are right now. Anyway, keep the knife in the pocket, and the pen to the page, because this stuff's good.
Spike |
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