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Floating Down River
Contributed by
theloadeddragon
on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 02:10:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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fragmenting life,
deceiving logic
principles die in cities,
like friendships worth remembering
Then break,
shouldn't you leave somewhere
shouldn't you care
somewhere down the river
we'll find each other
conceive sentiment
show me truth
GOD SAVE ME
from love to ashes on foam
driving the scenic route
my world conformed
in a shallow grave
telling my story
to conserve our hate
Or Kill my love
And steal my soul
God Can Save Me
But He won't
The old Me should have died
I was reborn
something had to happen
I wouldn't give up
but there was no succuess
suicide found me
contemplating
Copyright ©
theloadeddragon
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2005-04-28 02:10:39]
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Re: Floating Down River
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 05:08:55 PM AEST
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| I read it correctly and it's a good write,please check out some of my poems! |
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