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Reflecting Pool
Contributed by
grey_matters
on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:03:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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In this sea, I can see, no scenery, just endless but ending,
cliffs all descending, down into the depthes,
where i've wept, reflecting pool...
Strangers stares, and spiral stares, take me here, down to where,
I can see for once, what i've become, in my own eyes,
and all i've done, nothing more was said but words there, ripples rip and tear,
through my reflecting pool...
I apologize, i've all but died, clear away the leaves, deceit, so that I may see,
myself in me, only because i've lied, and every tear, has fallen clear, to stain my heart,
and make a mirror, and looking up at me, is a fool, reflecting pool...
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2005-04-28 10:03:45]
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Re: Reflecting Pool
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:31:49 AM AEST
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I really liked the flow of this poem. It was very nice. Good job.
~Kortnie~ |
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Re: Reflecting Pool
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:10:14 PM AEST
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| this was a great write. it had good flow and the way you expressed this idea was briliant.. |
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