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Breakdown Service
Contributed by
EndEformEtrancE
on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I sit and wonder
What would happen if I lost
Everything I own
At least Id still have
Memories like photographs
To remember this
The fact still remains
You are not so far away
I can deal with this
The forces that pull
Us apart can only push
Us more together
I sit and wonder
What would happen if I lost
All the things I am
You would still show me
The way back to sanity
I would recover
My lips would touch yours
And I would be forever
Happy in your arms
Id be safe inside
Your grasp until the end of
This dream that Im in
Scrape me off of this
Cold, wet asphalt, breathe
New life into my dead lungs.
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EndEformEtrancE
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2002-12-26 21:20:00]
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Re: Breakdown Service
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 04:43:30 AM AEST
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Oh breathtaking, and to wonder what one would lose if they lost everything, that's a huge question to ask oneself...i enjoyed reading this poem i find it very different, and unique...it has a style all to it's own and i love the last lines.....Scrape me off of this cold, wet asphalt, breath new life into my dead lungs....that is so deep and dark...and the meaning of it is so strong it's soul captivating, thanks for sharing this one my friend...your poetry is a pleasure to read...
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