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The World as I Knew It
Contributed by
tiger_grl
on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 04:24:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pains my only constant Fears my only friend Hates the path thats leading me To my nearing end
Why do I not matter This bloody life I curse When did everyone elses ***** Suddenly become worse
In every fight I've been in In every life I've lived They make me out as evil Maybe it's time to give
My blackened heart is colder My life's not worth a dime Maybe I should give up now And call it quittin' time
No one can know the pain I feel Some think they have it worse But every pain is different And the person that it hurts
Fear has stayed beside me Through the sun and the fog It'll be with me forever Chasing with Satan's dogs
I feel this hate inside of me Leading to my demise With every passing day or so Increasing in its size
Stress has built up on me From everyone forgetting No one listens to what I say Unless it is forbidding
Forget about the good stuff And righteous things I've done How about we focus on The times I hurt someone
Say what you want about me My flesh is made of steel That's what everyone seems to think But emotions I do feel
So say what you will about me It only fuels the flame You think what I've said now is bad It's actually quite tame
I'm sorry if I hurt ya' Hard to believe but true But odds are good some of the same Have come to me from you
Now if you'll all excuse me It's time for me to end Pain was my only constant I feared for lack of friends
Love was always bitter Not like the sweet juices of sorrow Finally I'm glad to say I won't see you tomorrow
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tiger_grl
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2005-04-28 16:24:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The World as I Knew It
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:03:29 PM AEST (User
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Excellent write. Good flow and great choice of word usuage.
I truly enjoyed this.
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Re: The World as I Knew It
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:03:49 PM AEST (User
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Excellent write. Good flow and great choice of word useage.
I truly enjoyed this.
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