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Drawer 34
Contributed by
sinned
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Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:42:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I don't know where to begin
I am no longer here
Even now the thought and I cringe
This story may cause you to fear
Your town my town
It doesn't matter
Yeah; I've been around
fear, is fear, is fear
Anyway I had just arrived
It was hot and humid
Sweating perfusly hardly a spot on my body dry
Suddenly feeling sick like I had to vomit
I still at the depot out front on the walk way
In this strange city
I could feel my body sway
Over whelmed I was so dizzy
I couldn't remember anything
I woke up in a cool strange room
I heard some talking
Mr.Fetcher; how do you suppose he sucome ?
I couldn't speak nor move
Looks as though he had a stroke
My god ! I'm at the morgue
Stop ! stop ! their undressing me
I was freezing on this cold slab
Embarassed
I couldn't grab
I wanted to be dressed
Miss Leach; since your new this species your first
A a woman god; my nakedness
I tried to learch
I couldn't my whole body was stiff
Miss Leach I don't want to see any indesion
Mr. Fetcher he is a fine speciment
Use this scaffel for your insision
How long have you been in interment ?
Just then the phone rang
It's superintendant Hacker
I felt nothing but fear and anger
Miss Leach we'll get to him later
Their putting a tag on my toe
Here help me put him in the receptacle
Me nothing, but a John Doe
I'd rather be in hell
Mark it; he's in drawer 34
Now we'll see what Hacker needs
We'll get to him tomorrow
Slide him in Leach
I was freezing
Naked scared to death
I'm a human being
I thought I would freeze
I felt the drawer drawling out
Help me slid him on the gerney
I tried to shout
Not a whinney
I couldn't move I couldn't make a sound
The butcher she's going to cut
God Darn
The horrible pain in my chest
"Fetcher" He was still alive
He's a bleeder
I could feel myself losing life
She's a gouger a grim reaper
Spurting ozzing
Fearing
Dying I'm going to go
Nobody a a a John Doe
Sinned
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Re: Drawer 34
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:52:20 PM AEST
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| Very nice poem .. good job! |
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Re: Drawer 34
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by kitty_express2001 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:02:32 PM AEST
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| This is a very good write!! |
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Re: Drawer 34
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:59:38 PM AEST
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Scary, Scary, very creative Scary too, which means you took me with you!!!
Wonderful Poem Sinned, and I usually don't dark poetry, but this well written indeed!
I could understand it and could empathetic too! And since I'm so practical.........I really see this happening!
Crafted just right........enjoyed it very much
Warm Love
LovingCritters
ConSue
Thanking you so much for your fine comments on my poem also! |
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Re: Drawer 34
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:35:22 AM AEST
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yeepers! excellent images, totally captivating! hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: Drawer 34
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:22:22 AM AEST
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Well now that's three lives down, u definently a cat.
Good work I'm teasing u hope ya know that.
smiles, huggs,
emy |
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