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The Lies of My Eyes
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 07:29:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My eyes have betrayed me yet again
They saw you as someone you were not
They told me a lie
They have done that a lot
They thought you were someone else
Trusting them is a mistake
Of course, trusting you was a mistake, too
A risk I dont like to take
I saw you as someone I could trust
But you fooled me and my eyes
You said you were my friend- but you lied
My eyes believed you, though, and told me lies
I thought I could trust you
I saw you as a friend
But I guess we just have to
Say goodbye in the end
I wish we didnt
I wish my eyes
Didnt see you like that
I wish they didnt lie
No one should trust their eyes
They all just tell lies
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Re: The Lies of My Eyes
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by Whatchamacallit on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:41:40 PM AEST
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| Wow! I randomnly clicked on this particular poem and now I must check out the others you have wrote. This poem can, and probably will, touch many other people..as it already has touched me. Very good work. |
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Re: The Lies of My Eyes
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by spazz911 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:49:56 PM AEST
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| thats the prob with eyes the only see the dont understand.... i hate lies.... they r often given |
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Re: The Lies of My Eyes
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by blue_angel on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:05:28 PM AEST
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ooh who is this one about? lol
youre a great writer sprinter27. i never knew it but you were hiding a great wonderous talent. i knew there was something more to you than what meets the eye... for eyes tell but more lies according to your poem right? wow well great job. i hate liars, although i am guilty of lying myself, but who isnt? show me someone who says theyve never lied and ill show you, well, a liar.
jennie* |
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Re: The Lies of My Eyes
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by GAMEchief on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 04:15:03 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry you were hurt like that. It makes me want to give you a hug. I do feel your pain. |
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