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Braided With Love
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:26:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I transcend past time
To hold you in my arms
You said I love you
I said I love you more
The one I love and call mine
The one I truely adore
. . .
The love beyond my dreams
Our threads of fate forever
Tied together at the seams
. . .
The brightest star shining
On the darkest of nights
My fallen angel you are
And my first love, I admit
Ceaced all my crying
With the words you said, I'll never forget
. . .
Every "I love you" from the start
Cherished forever as the love
You braided
. . .
Into my heart
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ForeverAlone
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2005-04-28 20:26:15]
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Re: Braided With Love
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by Daydreamer on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:44:37 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this write. There was a time I thought I would only find the guys only out for one thing but now I found a real man and your write reminds me of him. ~day~ |
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Re: Braided With Love
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by TheVoice on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:11:45 PM AEST
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a very nice write.
the voice
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Re: Braided With Love
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:18:52 PM AEST
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A refreshing well written piece of poetry elucidating the essence of true love. A beautiful write.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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Re: Braided With Love
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:49:53 PM AEST
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| well clark, i cant say that i really liked this poem at all. i didnt like the topic, the format, or the ending. everything that you usually master in a poem i did not see here. i wonder if that is just because it is a love poem, or if this truely not one of your best. in the beginning, all i saw was the use of the same word all too much. you said so much of love, but i didnt even feel the love that i know you possess. |
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Re: Braided With Love
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:58:19 PM AEST
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ohh.. this is sooo beautiful and loving:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: Braided With Love
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by suprasurfer on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:21:54 PM AEST
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| I liked the idea but I didnt really like the way it was written because of the repeats of the same word. |
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