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Worst Fear
Contributed by
Whatchamacallit
on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:35:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The night began
With a knock at her door
She hurried to let him in
As shed done many times before
She may be incredibly shy
But he doesnt seem to mind
For she is the kind of girl
Hed been hoping to find
Why cant she open up?
Why cant she tell him her thoughts?
It kills her to think that her shyness
Might cause her great loss
She wishes she could tell him
All the things she feels inside
But she cant seem to get the courage
No matter how hard she tries
He could tell something was wrong
She was acting very different tonight
He couldnt put his finger on it
But something didnt seem right
Her thoughts were a blur
She was struggling to gain control
She had to tell him so many things
Theres so much he needed to know
She thought of the night they met
And all the things he had said
She knew that he was unique
And someone she could never forget
Her voice wasnt much louder than a whisper
When she began to speak from her heart
Telling him all the things
That had been tearing her apart
He patiently listened as she spoke
It hurt him to see her so incredibly scared
He wanted to hold her close
And assure her hed always be there
She poured out her entire soul
Left none of her true feelings hidden
He smiled at her blushing face
Thankful for all that hed been given
He never thought that his feelings
Could become any deeper
He knew in his own heart
That she was definitely a keeper
I dont want to lose you
It may sound stupid but its true
My days, nights, and mornings
Are haunted by constant thoughts of you
So please be patient
I pray that you arent deceiving me
Cause Ive let myself get too attached
Youve became someone I need
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Whatchamacallit
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2005-04-28 20:35:28]
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Re: Worst Fear
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 10:15:30 PM AEST
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A touching and meaningful piece. It is well-written as well. Keep it up.
Andrew
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Re: Worst Fear
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by Shishke_Bob on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 10:37:25 PM AEST
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this was very heart felt and deeply touching, I do hopoe that you are feeling better, being one who is shy (kinda) I have an idea what its like to feel this way. Do keep writing. later
KaBob |
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