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You Will Never Take Me Down
Contributed by
jmpy84
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Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:42:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You always told me dont do this
You cant do that
Well I got this to say
Get out of my way
You criticize anything I do
You shove my mistakes in my face
All you can do is tell lies
So shut up I dont want to hear it
You can do what you want
You can tell my faults
But no matter what you do or say
You will never take me down
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jmpy84
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2005-04-28 22:42:25]
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Re: You Will Never Take Me Down
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:53:04 PM AEST
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+Very powerfull, wise write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: You Will Never Take Me Down
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by mannyrich on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:16:48 AM AEST
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| wonderful! a very strong poem with awonderful courage. I like it!!! |
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Re: You Will Never Take Me Down
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 01:08:44 AM AEST
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A great show of poetic exspression, clear and
2 the point, very nice writting . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: You Will Never Take Me Down
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 03:03:56 AM AEST
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Josh This is great powerful, strong write. I loved the way you've conveyed it. You rock my friend. Don't ever let anyone take ya down.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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Re: You Will Never Take Me Down
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by shortcut on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 04:23:32 PM AEST
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| Tell it like it is! But stay strong! Nice poem! |
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