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YOU'RE A GOOD MAN., MY SON
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 02:14:03 AM in AEST
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YOU ARE A GOOD MAN, MY SON
When you were young,
I gave you my right hand......
Now that I'm old, you give
me yours, that I might stand.....
You are a Good man, my son!
When we found ourselves homeless,
Not one complaint, you were dauntless.
One whole year you sat up to sleep.....
So I could lie down- not an easy feat.
You're a man of Character, my son!
Our food supply exhausted....
Not a crumb for two weeks, frosted.
You shoveled snow with gloved hand...
Weak, I could barely stand.
You are a very Kind man, my son!
Judge commands:" You will visit your father!"
Threat of jail, in open court, "Never!"
"He is a very bad man, I take my stand!"
From that day 'til now, he is banned"
You are a very Courageous man, my son!
Your heart so deep, lovingly empathetic,
Stray friends, stray dogs, heartsick.
Loan them money, bring them home.
Out of the cold, they no longer roam.
You are a Generous man, my son!
Not religious per se, but qualities fine
You have scruples, principles, n'er decline.
You worship your God unpretentiously.
Not budging when others disagree fiercely
You are a Faithful man, my son!
They were your choices, freewill
You chose to love good, to walk uphill
You've made a Mother's heart so glad
Because you chose, to hate the bad!
You have Integrity, my son!
For you everyday I tell you of my love....
A sincere, meaningful love from above.
Have I also told you I'm so proud.....
Do you mind if I shout it, out loud?
What a mature man you've become,
my Wonderful son!
Written especially for you
Lovingly,
Your Mom
April 29, 2005
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Listen to your father who
caused your birth, and do not despise
your mother just because she has grown old."
"Your father and mother will rejoice,
and she that gave birth to you
will be joyful."
The Bible-
Proverbs 23:22-25.
My son, Montie, today
"Grateful Mother Smiles"
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Re: YOU'RE A GOOD MAN., MY SON
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by emystar on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 02:31:34 AM AEST
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Wow mom he is a hottie.
This reminds me of my own son.
A very touching masterpeice of dedication.
He will always cherish this.
What would we do without our sons?
Yeah, I know I'd hate to ever try-n-find out
luv, huggs, big smiles,
yo brat,
emy |
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Re: YOU'RE A GOOD MAN., MY SON
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 03:05:54 AM AEST
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wow is right.
as always i enjoy reading your poetry.awsome job.
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Re: YOU'RE A GOOD MAN., MY SON
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 03:20:31 AM AEST
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Momma Consue this is absolutely beautiful. Such a fitting tribute to such a special guy. May God shower his blessings over u all.
A true master piece written with every essence of love and pride. Well done on an outstanding beautiful poem.
Hugs,
~sue~
PS yo brat 2 |
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Re: YOU'RE A GOOD MAN., MY SON
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by Sinned on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 05:10:52 AM AEST
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Lovingcritters
This is a lovely tribute to your son. I can feel your pride.If I may I will add that the picture shows a beautiful young man.He is very handsome and you woman sure did rigt by giving him the morals that he lives by.I enjoyed this write may God bless both of you.
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Re: YOU'RE A GOOD MAN., MY SON
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:31:28 PM AEST
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THAT WAS A 5 ALL THE WAY! YOUR SON SOUNDS LIKE A GREAT & CARING PERSON! I BELIEVE HE IS SO GREAT DUE TO THAT OF HAVING A GREAT MOTHER!! HE HAS TO BE JUST AS PROUD OF YOU TOO!!! IT HAS TO BE SOMETHING IN THE BLOOD!!!! SO SMILE TOO,FOR YOUR UNSELFISHNESS & GREAT CARING YOU HELPED MAKE HIM WHAT HE IS TODAY!!!!! IN WHICH REFLECTS ON HOW YOU'RE A GREAT MOTHER,TOO!!!!!!
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Re: YOU'RE A GOOD MAN., MY SON
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:04:42 PM AEST
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Yes indeed Consue - this is a masterpiece ;of a dedication, but so deserved. You can be so proud of your son. He has everything that we ought to have.An upright heart , full of love - no more is needed
It is deeply touching when a mother sings the excellences of a so worthy son.
Give thanks to the Lord for such a marvellous and incomparable gift.
Just wonderful!
Love and peace
Elizabeth |
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