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I'm So Sorry
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 07:39:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I am so sorry I treated you bad,
Your love was the best I ever had,
Now its gone its left my side,
I feel like everything in me has died.
I had it yet love I destroyed,
I played with it just like a toy,
I took it for granted I was wrong,
I dont deserve you, alone I belong.
At night I find it hard to sleep,
I lay alone shaking as I weep,
I call out your name you are not there,
Never again will we be able to share.
I have lost it all I just can not believe,
So here Ill sit & I will grieve,
I have years of regret to look forward to,
I am so sorry that I ever hurt you.
You gave to me your everything,
Loved me soul & made it sing,
I gave you to my anger & my hate,
It sealed our doom & I sealed our fate.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-04-29 07:39:23]
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by sride686 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:07:43 AM AEST
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| All I can say at first is Damn girl. That write was so awesome and really hit at home in my life and my writes. Their was so much sorrow and pain in that poem. If this is true of your life I feel your pain and I thank you for sharing these powerful emotions with all of us. I can’t event put in to words how hard this write hit me. Thank you and I look forward to more of you work. Your pin has truly write on my heart with this write. Take care and again wonderful write….Steve |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:17:14 PM AEST
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Sorry pixie for your sadness it hurt reading this but i will keep on reading your work in
support of u while u r feeling this way whish u
well as always my friend and wlaways i will be amost ardent admirer of your beautiful
poetry as well as your friend . . .
((((((((4pixie)))))))
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:19:08 PM AEST
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awww pixie girl i am sorry that you have to go through that kind of pain.
an awsome emotional deep write.
love ya
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by Mangs on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 01:14:13 PM AEST
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| AWW..... |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 03:59:37 PM AEST
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Krissie this was such a sad sad write.
I wont say much but if you ever need to talk im here for you.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:00:14 PM AEST
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| this is not one of your best poems, but this is still very emotional and heartwrenching. some of your rhymes just seemed a bit forced, and this didnt seem to have the quality that you usually have in your works of art. your ending was spectacular though, that i loved. and as for the concept...thoughts and feelings are worse than reality, and it wasnt meant to be if your personalities clashed in such a way. |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:13:34 PM AEST
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I don't really know what to say in support as
reading of your raw pain in this poem really
hit me deep. I just want you to know that you
have friends beside you that care and are
willing to lend a hand if asked for. I just wish
that I could do more.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:43:08 PM AEST
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awww....
extra big hugs n' love always, nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:24:14 PM AEST
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Sorry to see you hurting Pixie. Love can be a right pain. This was a superb write.
((((MASSIVE HUGS))))) for you
It will get better time is a great healer
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:08:15 AM AEST
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Aww pix i feel for you really I do, we all **** up at times and at others we blame ourselves when it's not our fault. Things will work out, if i could give you any sort of advice it's... please don't carry the weight of the world on your shoulders, cause the world don't give a toss, just worry about yourself and take care.
Johnny. |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 12:13:33 PM AEST
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I'm never sure when someone writes a sad poem like this, whether it is an actual situation or just a sad poem as a work of art.
It was elegaht, with a good flow. If this is an actual situation, I would offer any support I can. If we learn something from our mistakes, then at least there is something important salvaged.
May you find comfort in knowing we care
Will |
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Re: I'm So Sorry
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by apcfan on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:17:40 PM AEST
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I hope everything gets better. Great write, full of emotion.
~*~Brandi~*~ |
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