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PATRONIZED
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 07:00:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Life proved
no more
than
detrimental
Constantly one
thing or another
trying to
satisfy
the audience
waiting for a
mistake that
wrong step i
may make
Hawk eyeing
my every
move grasping
tightly the wrong
having a point
to prove
I'm breathing
sadness trapped
in my solitude
In the end
no ones satisfied
not even me
are you?
Copyright ©
sweetoccasion29
... [
2005-04-29 19:00:18]
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Re: PATRONIZED
(User Rating: 1 )
by kitty_express2001 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:50:32 PM AEST
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Re: PATRONIZED
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:54:09 PM AEST
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This is a true work of poetic art, u defined me
in this without know ing it i can relate 2 this
so much, i beleive the word is people pleaser
beautifuly done . . .
Dorian Chambers
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