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A fated past
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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So listen very closely
If it would that you may
And lend me if you will
to all that comes what may
To a fated past
of a long forgotten day
of words well worth repeating
just to hear what they might say
Of dreams once spun in yesteryear
that shine of brightest light
of roads that one might travel
as we walk beyond the night
Of tales of old, and both brand new
that lead us ever on
to rise above the darkness
and to face another dawn
to find a road and follow
in search of ones own fate
with hopes that our tomorrow
will not find us late.
Copyright ©
wordsy
... [
2002-12-26 23:35:00]
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Re: A fated past
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 09:03:03 PM AEST
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| very enjoyable you talent shines through |
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Re: A fated past
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by darkmind on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 02:52:20 PM AEST
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| yeah i used to have dreams too good poem |
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Re: A fated past
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 04:54:52 PM AEST
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| wonderful write, thanks for sharing |
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Re: A fated past
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 08:44:38 AM AEST
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| This is a lovely poem ... it flows beautifully. thanks for sharing it with os =) |
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Re: A fated past
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 08:44:51 AM AEST
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| This is a lovely poem ... it flows beautifully. thanks for sharing it with us =) |
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Re: A fated past
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by stateofgray on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 01:43:29 PM AEST
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| i can relate to it, i especially like the part of finding a road and following it-rob |
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