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My Time To End
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 08:57:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I want to pick up the knife
And end this long-lasting strife
I want to feel the cold blade
Slowly enter this body God mistakenly made
Maybe pick up a pistol
And place it to my head and pull
I want to feel the blast
Inside my body at last
I want to feel the relief that the end has come
And know that I will soon be gone
I want breathing to become hard
And collapse into the yard
I want to feel the agony and pain
I deserve and finally shut off my brain
I must say goodbye, friend
For it is my time to end
Copyright ©
sprinter27
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2005-04-29 20:57:59]
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Re: My Time To End
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:25:16 PM AEST
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no no no NO. you will not die, it is NOT your time. like you just told me, we die alone together right? well you will not die, so i guess i am obligated to stay then huh? well as long as you stay alive...
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: My Time To End
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by kitty_express2001 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:53:46 PM AEST
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| Your poem was sad... but good!!!!! |
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Re: My Time To End
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 03:05:09 PM AEST
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| That's such a sad poem. There are other options other than ending your life... you can find them if you follow your heart... please don't do that to yourself :'( Jenny |
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