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for today we are forever
Contributed by
bttrflynajar
on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:40:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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tell me all your wants
tell me all your needs
baby give me your hand
and trust me with lifes hard demand
gotta give it all away
forget about tommorows yesterday
just hold on to everything you got
and hope to god you wont get caught
cuz baby i cant see you
when im blinded by the hurt
that pulls me down so dooownnnn
so tell me its alright.
and maybe just maybe
tonight
i'll turn out the lights
and rest my worries again.
dont ask me what i'd do
cuz baby i dont know without you
but leave it all behind
live for every hour
tell me all you troubles
and give me all your pain
cuz baby i know
i know
how to make it all
be just ok again
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2005-04-30 14:40:08]
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Re: for today we are forever
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by pixie on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:55:32 PM AEST
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sweet and loving write,
pix xx |
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Re: for today we are forever
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by Live2Die on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 06:13:18 PM AEST
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| nice rhythm, nice poem. good job on this one. I love your writing |
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