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I struggling with my life!
Contributed by
Butterflygirl40
on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 06:34:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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When I wake up In the morning .. nothing ever seems to go right.
I wake up to brightness to see your face looking back at me.
And All I can say Is nothing .. Cause Im Backing away from you.
You told me I was ageing ..And that put a ache in my soul.
So when I went to bathing.You told me I was nothing.
Then you told me you were acting.
After you told me that you were acting all alone.
I just sat there and cried.
And then I wanted to died.
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2005-04-30 18:34:21]
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Re: I struggling with my life!
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 06:59:49 PM AEST
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| very good!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: I struggling with my life!
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by kitty_express2001 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 07:06:57 PM AEST
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| VERY GOOD!! |
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Re: I struggling with my life!
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by Kiira on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 07:15:51 PM AEST
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nice job! Thanks for commenting on my poem...I'm new to this site and need all the help I can get.
~Kiira~ |
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