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im not just what you see
Contributed by
Arty_Sydney
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Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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at this moment in time i feel quite cool
just knowing my mind is one that does rule
open to new, open to old
my mind is a golden gate to my soul
to get to know me
would take quite some time
but even then will you unravel my mind?
i seem to be simple, quite dumb and cute
but there is alot i dont share with you
things that are me, things that are mine
so dont you dare try unravel my mind!
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2002-12-27 00:40:00]
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Re: im not just what you see
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by venkat on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 02:08:03 AM AEST
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| The last line doesn't fit.. unfolld your heart and let others share its feelings if your mind is a golden gate to your soul.better next time. |
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Re: im not just what you see
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 07:08:44 AM AEST
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| i was trying to say theres things that i will never share, that are mine and will always be just mine.. so thats why the line dont dare try unravel my mind |
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Re: im not just what you see
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 02:51:08 PM AEST
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Interesting write...
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Re: im not just what you see
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 10:02:38 AM AEST
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| I really like this ... great poem. Please write more. |
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