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I didn't See it
Contributed by
lonely_kakashi
on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:00:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I needed some space,
I just couldn't see it.
I felt claustrophobic,
I just couldn't see it.
I felt Trapped but,
I just couldn't see it.
I needed some time alone but,
I just couldn't see it.
I needed some time to think for myself but,
I just couldn't do it.
I needed some time to gather my thoughts,
I just couldn't hear them.
I needed some to realise that I was an individual,
I just didn't feel it.
I needed some time to see I wasn't an extension of someone else,
I just couldn't see it.
So I sat and I cried because,
I didn't see it.
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lonely_kakashi
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2005-04-30 21:00:50]
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Re: I didn't See it
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:15:31 AM AEST
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| 'i didn't see it'....but now you do,I guess ?That's life....if only hindsight was available in the present.Thought your poem was very good. |
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Re: I didn't See it
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by CJo on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:47:43 AM AEST
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| I'm at the point where all I need is space from relationships because of every reason you listed.. I really enjoyed your writing. Nice job! |
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