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The sore toe
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kitty_express2001
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Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:03:20 PM in AEST
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My toe hurts really bad.
My toe is sad.
It hurts so bad it makes me want to cry.
it makes me want to die.
It makes me want to eat pie.
I would rather stick a needle in my eye
than this pain.
I would rather knock myself out with a cane.
Than to live with this pain.
what have i gain?
Nothing but pain and sorrow.
Let me borrow some needles to num this sore pore of mine.
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Re: The sore toe
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by SLiM_eLviS on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:11:23 PM AEST
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| haha... i actually found this poem funny, i don't know if that's what you intended... but man it cracked me up... and smiles are always good, keep it up. |
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Re: The sore toe
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by sp3llicup on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:35:38 PM AEST
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lol..great poem!! lol..that must have been some hard work there...lol jk jk..i like it..you should make more like this..but without a toe..lol...keep writing!!
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Re: The sore toe
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 11:32:21 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem! and also funny! it cracked me up! keep up the good work. |
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Re: The sore toe
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 04:22:23 AM AEST
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Kitty-express
Are you sure you want me to comment ? This was your worst poem yet. "I hope your toe gets better" I neither found this hurmous nor funny just silly.Sorry I know how wel you can write---so keep writing more please.
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Re: The sore toe
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by thexshattered on
Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 08:47:22 AM AEST
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| Well, it was clever of you to create something out of your pain. However, the rhyming is quite amateur, therefore seems forced. If this was meant to be humorous, you touched on that concept very lightly. |
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