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The bad of it All (duet)
Contributed by
KishaLovesCare126
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:29:43 AM in AEST
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4/30/2005
I'm walking up and down...
Too much I see....
All the people staring at me
Scars exposed
My head ready to explode.
I dont know where to go.
Stuck in a place I don't wanna be...
They won't let me free...
They never can see
People laugh at me
Behind my back, stab my heart
Im losing all of what I lack.
Invisible to all...
They laugh when I fall....
I can't take this no more, I crash through a wall
Echos of all my pain kept in
Will I start to cave in?
The pain so thin on my skin
How come Im a freak they never will understand.
I'm pushed to the ground...
Shoved out of the way, never to be found...
Try to scream for help, but I hear no sound
Dirt in my eyes
Crying my tears
Untie the book that holds my fears
This world is cruel beyond its years.
Caitlin Lambert and Care Strom
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KishaLovesCare126
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2005-05-01 03:29:43]
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Re: The bad of it All (duet)
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 08:05:15 AM AEST
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| This is a good write but you should have labeled it self struggle but I’m sure you just forgot to label it. It also had a very strong ending witch is one of the best qualities of a poem in my book. I can’t stand when people leave a poem like its still open at the end. Good write and a good read take care girl….Steve |
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