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torn to pieces
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 07:28:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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laying helplessly
in the blood you spilt for me
my body twisted and mangled
in a crippled torment
my soul stabbed in the back
and my heart
lays scattered
peice by piece
torn apart
black and poisoned
by those words you said
the actions you did
the way you bared your fist
how you spat in my face
my lungs starved of air
because without you
i cannot breathe
i lay here dying
choking on my own regergitated heart
swarming with disease
and infested with fleas
feeding on the poisoned blood
my mind is full of scorpians
stinging and consuming me
my eyes are glazed
and my mind is a haze
of mistaken love
i rather die
and never remember your face
than lay here for eternity
thinking of you
and how we use to be
lovers
bursting with passion
now we vanished
the romance gone
and as the greeks use to ask
after a person died
did they have passion
they will laugh at my decomposed corpse
and send me to the underworld
for my passion was poisoned
and i was torn to pieces
in an act of mistaken love
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2005-05-01 07:28:35]
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Re: torn to pieces
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 07:49:12 AM AEST
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| You want to talk about pain its all in this write that’s for sure. No one should ever feel this pain but why do we. Why is it that we can have a love so strong and then that love will leave and take are heart with it. This was a very vivid write but really got the readers attention drawn into the emotions you are showing. Take care and know you have friends here if you ever need to talk….Steve |
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Re: torn to pieces
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:42:55 AM AEST
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| I love the emotion you put in this poem. You just gotta move on. I wish you luck, it sounds like you deserve someone better. Jenny |
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