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Thorns
Contributed by
adsalamon
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:27:05 AM in AEST
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Black thorns scratch at my heart
Its vines twisting in knots, suffocate
Bitter poison seeps through open wounds
My soul lies naked, torn and beaten
My spirit swings from a noose up high
Vultures tear the flesh of my mind
The walls of my castle lay as rubble
Weeds poke through cracks like forests
Seeds of despair you sowed take root
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adsalamon
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2005-05-01 08:27:05]
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Re: Thorns
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:49:05 AM AEST
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Wow...
This is one awesome write.
"Seeds of despair you sowed take root"
Best line, right there. Amazing. I absolutely adored this poem.
- Stacey |
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Re: Thorns
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by ivoryA on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:31:03 PM AEST
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your poem is very good
its so descriptive! It puts images in my head that will be stuck there for a while |
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